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Every scene features its own specific stability of dialogue, inner ideas, action, and description.
The precise proportions of each and every element may differ for different POVs, genres, scenes, degree of temperature, etc., however they are constantly current.
Why then, for the love of all plain things Taylor and Seraphina, do we forget this guideline in terms of intercourse scenes? Why do we matter your reader to the (often literal) blow-by-blow description of exactly what Seraphina is performing to Taylor and vice versa? Continue reading “An excellent editor can come straight straight down if we get too mechanical or bogged down with unimportant details on us like a ton of bricks”